In most cases, a parent steps over the boundary when it comes to spanking. The best decision for many people is to just avoid spanking altogether as a form of discipline.
Many parents challenge the notion that they can spank in a calm, planned manner. The American Academy of Pediatrics estimated that “85% of parents expressed moderate to high anger, remorse, and agitation while punishing their children.”(stopspanking) Assuming this information is true, especially since its a specialized committee on psychological aspects of child and family health, the idea that a parent can control themselves while discipling a child can be questioned. Most people find it difficult to put a lid on their emotions when they are anrgy. In many cases, this anger can lead to harsh punishment.In fact, the US department of Health and Human services reported that “142,000 children are seriously injured from Corporal punishment every year in this country.” (NTAC) This group is known for their reports on the damaging consequences of violence and trama. They even went on the say that many times these injuries lead to permanent disabilies. How can a child so young and in the eve of life have such horrible experiences.
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